FlutterPie - Part 1

My first attempt at fan-fictio. It is terrible, I know, but oh well, too bad. Feel free to make any criticism you like, constructive ones are always welcome. And yeah, if you do actually enjoyed it, I'll be uploading more parts soon, though it shouldn't be more than 3.

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) and all it's characters are the property of their respective owners (not me, then).

EDIT: see that awesome drawing for a cover? Yeah, it was made by ~kazababomb.
Go check out his channel right now! [link]